Egads!

Chapter 24 is a mess! It will take be days to clean it up. I know when I did my draft I did have a few chapters (or maybe more than a few) that was not in a good "showing" kind of way. Mostly telling. Frankly, sometimes I just got lazy-well no-I was typing my thoughts so fast I never stopped and fixed the chapter. Now I do.

The men all go into town (all but Rawlings - he and Hurst like staying in the library with a few good bottles and good stories about the cooks pastries). Well, Darcy sees you know who there and makes another misunderstood comment cementing the Meryton opinion of him. Blake does hope off to Longbourn and gets a gander at Lizzy's redesigned dresses. lol

that is all the hints for now. Have to go clean it up.

I am planning to post sometime today. Just not sure when. Saturdays are pretty much not my readers.

Oh and today I am off for asheville. shopping, lunch, and a movie I think. Or maybe dinner and not lunch.

till tomorrow or maybe later tonight.

gayle