I'm back!

With my son here I have been busier than usual. Also he has a habit of taking my wireless keyboard away as I type. He is an annoying little devil at times!

Well, I posted Chapter 18 and readers found out I do not put you know who on a pedestal. In fact, the whole story is about his change from typical arrogant snob to a really great man. It is just that most readers cannot see that view yet.

There were several readers that did like the concept: Lord vs. Tradesman. Well, it is the symbol for the story.

Next up is the Netherfield Park phase where Jane and Elizabeth come. I have slightly changed the events. Mrs. Bennet comes with Jane and Elizabeth and they have that talk in the NP parlor where she starts out "What a sweet room you have here." I have created a different scene in that the five gentlemen are present and add to the conversation. Read carefully. As usual I have several different conversations going on at once. Different people are talking about and to others. Gosh, even DebraAnne has said it is a really, really good filler chapter. Although nothing I write is a true filler since every scene has something important for the reader to remember.

I must notify Lucy that the contents of the "letter" is finally revealed. I don't know if she is still reading it (since I have lost several hundred readers- from 800 to start down to 400 this week. Of course, I have a bet that if I am lucky I will still have 100 readers at the end. lol I do put Darcy thought the mill.

Jane will come the next chapter as will Elizabeth. Conversations do change somewhat because there are these 5 men.

Today I am working on Chapter 24 because I have now sent Chapter 23 off to the Steph. There is no excuse now.

well, till the next time.