Rewrites

Heather sent her comments back on chapter 20. I agree, I need to add a scene or two so that will be my assignment today.

AHA is down- cyber attack. I hope we are not involved in some vicious war between the jaff sites! lol I suspect it was just a regular virus not some intended take down over jealousy. just kidding about the war.

i also have to cut down a rug I purchased for my deck. my best friend owns and lives in the other side of the duplex at this mountain home community. we had them open our decks (why have to go out the front door and into another front door when all we have to door is step onto our decks. - efficient)

my cold is 85% gone which is good because my lungs take a huge hit when I catch colds, flus and i am always fearful of pnuemonia. now that will be the end of me if it happens. Damn copd is not nice sometimes.

well off to do my thing.