To laugh or not to laugh

Yep, they laughed. Most did. I received a lot of comments and most were very favorable to the glimpse scene. I had always laughed when I read that scene so I was hoping others would own the same kind of sense of humor. And a lot of them do.

but i missed the one issue that was just as important. Darcy making a comment and Lizzy reacting. I should have had Lizzy talk to Jane in the hallway while their parents were talking in the study. Lizzy could have explained her problem. I will go back and fix the chapter at AHA and HG. Cannot go back to DWG so I may have to add a little scene next week to their chapter. It is important to the story. This is why comments are helpful. I see what I missed doing. I explained it in the comment thread but not everyone goes to there.

I promised everyone that I wanted them to smile when they read my story, get angry, cry, go ahhh, feel sadness, and yes laugh. I want to bring out all the emotions from the readers. Of course I like keeping them on pins and needles simply because I like pins and needles stuff myself. lol. But this post was to bring out the heehaws. And I think I did it based on the response.

Next up, Wickham and Collins and then the chapters leading to the finale of the first book. I can't remember how many chapters but it is at least 4 or maybe 5. lol Oh well, it is all climatic once the cad and the simpleton arrive.

well, today is my 3rd wednesday of the month meeting day. I am also going to see a play. And attend a picnic by my theater group. so I am off and away to a busy day. geeze a poet and don't know it!

take care

gayle